PS- This is my first ever attempt at Hindi Poetry Writing.. I don't know how well it has come out but I am happy as I managed this much atleast.:)
In aankhon ke khaare paani se
main khud ko bhigoya karti thi
raat ke khamosh andheron mein
main bikhre khwaab piroya karti thi
Na thi koi aarzoo dil mein
na sapne dekha karti thi
bus yun hi tanha raahon mein
main khud ko khoja karti thi
Phir jaane kahaan se yun hi
tumne aakar thaam liya
aur pal bhar mein hi is dil ne
tumko apna maan liya
Haan kal hi toh baat hai yeh
tum ajnabi the in raahon mein
aur aaj yeh aalam hai ki
bus tum ho meri chaahon mein
Tumko paaya toh dil ne jaana
ab aur koi isko chaah nahin
haath tumhara thaama maine
rahenge ab hum saath yahin
Haan mujhko lagta hai yeh
kabhi toh kuch accha kiya hoga
tabhi mere haathon ki lakeeron mein
kisi ne tumhe likh diya hoga
23 comments:
arey wah wah i admire anyone whui can write in hindi
coz i suck in that :P
gud work ..keep writing more such poems :D
@ pete
wel i suck as well buddy..I dnt knw hw i managed ths..;)
Thnks..muning
Wow Charzz,
I have to admit it is a very cute poem with innocent and simple words but it speaks a lot! Very touchy...
Do write more such poems :)
@ satan's darling..
The wrdz had to simple as m vocab is realy bad in hindi..
But thn the msg was conveyed dast the best part..
Thnks fr apreciation :)
very nicely pen down..with beautifully composed..arrrrr
i mean good words of hindi...the best part, expression.... u hv used expressional words of hindii.. with infrangible rhyming...
Good work
Keep it up
Cheers:)
@ pallav..
ohhh...such lovely comments..i didn't expect..Thnks alot..
Haan kal hi toh baat hai yeh
tum ajnabi the in raahon mein
aur aaj yeh aalam hai ki
bus tum ho meri chaahon mein
these are my fav lines !! love them all the more everytime i read ur poem :)
@ prats
thnks alot sweethrt..and thnks f rthe help too..
muaah
*hugs*
Its really nice sweetie, Keep it up...!!! :)
welll....i read it before
u shwed me and it doesnt looks like ur first hindi poem yaaa
@ Rajni..
Thnks baby..
@ Ste..
Thanks alot buddy..m glad u lyk it..
Bahut khoob..! Mazaa aa gaya.
**Tumko paaya toh dil ne jaana
ab aur koi isko chaah nahin
haath tumhara thaama maine
rahenge ab hum saath yahin
- Beautifully put.
A laudable composition, per se. Keep writing. Spread the voice.
Peace.
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Greetings,
Thank you for stopping by to leave a note. I appreciate your time and your readership.
Be seeing you.
Peace. Have a nice day.
@ kratz..
thanks..m glad u liked it..n i wil keep stoppin by..coz i like to read you..:)
Really good
Pls do read my attempt at writing poems..
http://arnavspeaks.blogspot.com/search/label/Poem
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Superb Fantastic Poem :)
kitna pyara hai yah bhav...
tabhi mere haathon ki lakeeron mein
kisi ne tumhe likh diya hoga
likhate rahen aur HINDI font men likhen...
aap ke mann ki aap hi jaane
aap hi boge aap hi roye
sabko to laage k wo khush hi hoye
par khusi to uski sab k liye hoye
app to andar dard utha k
aap hi bhoge aap hi roye
wo toh mukh par khushi piroye
apni mushkil mein usko jeetaye
aur phir usko chura wo bhoke
par kismat par koun na hoye
sab ki khusi k liye
aap hi bhoge aap hi roye
wo toh mukh par khushi piroye
samay samay ka khel ye hoye
jiske dukh ka karan wo hoye
usko duvidha mein wo chode
jisne uske dukh sab dhoye
aap hi bhoge aap hi roye
wo toh mukh par khushi piroye
akele padna bas kismat me
than liya hai us kismat ko jisne
woh koi duja nahi hoye
wo toh wo hai jo mukh par khushi piroye
woh apno ka dard uthaye
tere liye haath sab jode
mange khusiyan ghar ghar sabse
wohi hai jisko ab jeevan mein
khusi ke neeche chupa ke dukh ko
vyateeth karna hai is jeevan ko
isi liye wo aap hi bhoge aap hi roye
par mukh par bas khushi piroye
ghar ke log ne saath he chota
peche se sab ne mukh mora
pehele baat jab bhi hoye
sab ne uske naam se cheda
ab wo mann ko baithe ghumake
us ki duvidha ko majak bana k
par dard nahi hoga unko prapt
kyunki beech me hai wo jo
aap hi bhoge aap hi roye
par mukh be bas khusi piroye.
उत्क्रिस्ट रचना लिखते रहे
wow!this is very good I like it very much plz be conti............
Hindi kavita ke prashansako ko Pranam,
I am putting some lines of My epic Madhumoti before you to read and enjoy.Madhumoti dedicated to great Indian philosopher and Haalawadi poet Late Dr.Harivansh Rai Bachchan is written by me but not yet published.
Koi mad me,koi madira me,
ladkhada raha hai jag sara,
jab niyati nirdayi ho palti
tab main jeeti baaji hara,
us din antim ghoont shesh thi
band ho chuki Madhushala
ud gaye hans aur haatho se
tha ludhak gaya khali pyala,
mund gai aankh,jam gaya rakt,
tham gaya hriday dhak-dhak bala,
Madhu jeevan hai mat rok mujhe ,
de de mujhko saqi hala.
and so on…………..
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Chhattisgarh.
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