Jul 6, 2008

SearchinG around..


Once again I m searching around
And my dear you are nowhere to be found
This silly feeling grips me tight
Whenever you are away, out of my sight
I don’t know why it’s so hard to smile
Even if you are away just for a while
I seek you, I find you, and I seek you again
And this time my search went in vain
Come to me fast or call me where you are
I want you near me—don’t stay so far
Come to me baby! I can’t wait any longer
This gloomy-sad feeling is getting stronger
I want to touch you-hear you-feel your presence
I have had enough, now can’t stand your absence
I wish you could see how I am without “YOU”
You are miles away my darling! You don’t have any clue
Just now a thought came to my mind
How lovely it would be if I find
I am here—badLY missinG YOU
And you are there—missinG me too…..

6 comments:

सुमीत के झा (Sumit K Jha) said...

Only thing i can write after reading this post is......"YOU V MATURE ENOUGH AS A POET". gUd caRRy oN.

The Solitary Writer said...

ahan charu romantic poem haan

wht inspired u to write this :p

its good very touching

use of words like baby and darling makes it more pleasing

achha hai

X said...

"I seek you, I find you, and I seek you again"



loved the repetiton.
cheerios!

CRD said...

hey lovely poem dear [:)]

Sawan said...

To give advice is easy..so I won't do it. But your words touched me..

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