Nov 1, 2008

A Tear speaks for itself....


I was entrapped in your Eye
Ever since you were hurt and went through pain..
But now I am free
I am glad your efforts went in Vain..

Why do you hide me away
And never give me my own space..
I know in my presence
You loose the beauty of your lovely face..

Every time you give me vent
I relieve you from the burden of your heart..
I prepare your soul
For a fresh and hopeful start..

However long the tale is
I cut it short in breadth and length..
Don't think of me as a Weakness
I am your Innermost Strength..

4 comments:

peter said...

wow after so many days here is a nicely written poem ...!
good job !

Anonymous said...

Damn nice...

Always see tears as the final wash away! Somethings require alot of tears, over many a nights to wash away the memories, the hurt, the pain..

There is a small problem with tears is that the salt in it erodes a part of us..While we trying to wash away everything with tears..we lose a part of ourselves...

Psycadellic Tuhin said...

Wow. Talk about weaknesses turning out to be strenghts, this is a definite example for sure. I do not want to sound like a critic, but i do feel that tears are a mechanism of delivery. Delivery of thoughts that remain in some corner anxiously waiting to emerge.
Cheers. Nice Post.

One more blogger said...

I just dropped here by random blog hopping. Nice blog. Will drop by more often.